My second major essay for English Composition I was the Community Observation paper. which was turned in on Halloween of 2014. In this one, we had to go around the local community of Tahlequah, OK and find something to write about. I chose the NSU Theatre Company, which is the college's theatrical company which has a Playhouse just off campus in downtown Tahlequah.
Even if you are not living in that area, I still suggest you go check out your local theatrical company, they work very hard to put on a great show, and many times raise money for local charities.
I ended up getting a 97 on this one. I had a few run on sentences. I actually went back and edited this one a bit after her comments, because I gave it to the NSUTC's coordinator, Dr. Robyn Pursley, whom I interviewed for the paper. My teacher's comment at the end was, "Good work! You present engaging material supported with evidence."